One day, I was kicking a ball in the yard when I accidently kicked the ground and a piece of grass lifted up. I saw something shinny under the piece of grass. I wanted to see what it was so I kept on digging. Once I finished, I saw that it was lots of beautiful plates. I showed my mom and she seemed really amazed. She told me to take it to a person in a museum to tell me what it was. The next day my mom took me to the museum. I met the person that was there. He told me that they were acient Roman plates and that the Romans used them to put wine. He also told me that the face in the middle was the god of wine, Bacchus. It was underground for 1500 years!
I went home and told my mom all the information that he told me. My mom told me that I should probably sell it to the museum and use the money to buy stuff. I asked her what I could buy and she said that we could all be rich and have a better house and I said ok. We went back to the museum that same day and told them that we wanted to sell it to the museum.The manager said that he would pay us 1,000,000 Riyals for it. Me and my mom said yes straight away.
We went home and talked with my dad to decide if we wanted to move to West Bay Lagoon and get a villa with a beach in the yard. We all sat down and talk to see if we wanted to move there. In the end, we all agreed that we did. we called all the moving trucks and we moved straight away. My room in the house was enormous and full of cool and expensive stuff. My whole family was comfortable with the house so we stayed there.
~Pilar~
I went home and told my mom all the information that he told me. My mom told me that I should probably sell it to the museum and use the money to buy stuff. I asked her what I could buy and she said that we could all be rich and have a better house and I said ok. We went back to the museum that same day and told them that we wanted to sell it to the museum.The manager said that he would pay us 1,000,000 Riyals for it. Me and my mom said yes straight away.
We went home and talked with my dad to decide if we wanted to move to West Bay Lagoon and get a villa with a beach in the yard. We all sat down and talk to see if we wanted to move there. In the end, we all agreed that we did. we called all the moving trucks and we moved straight away. My room in the house was enormous and full of cool and expensive stuff. My whole family was comfortable with the house so we stayed there.
THE END
~Pilar~
Pilar, Your "indoor skydiving" comment is very funny. It made me laugh out loud. However, the brevity (that was a spelling word) of your entry is not a good thing. The assignment was to write a creative story, 3 paragraphs long. Yours is one paragraph. You need to bulk this up. You can surely do better.
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